2011年北京中考英语作文 发布时间：2019-06-09 10:26:12
2011年北京中考英语作文
十． 文段表达（15分）
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其次数不计人所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
75． 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Hi! Liu Ming ,
I’m so sad . Angela is a close friend of mine . This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me . If I lend her the money , I’m afraid she won’t pay me back . I don’t know what to do . Do you have the same problem ? I need your help .
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon .
Yours ,
Alice
Hi ! Alice ,
I’m glad to hear from you ,
I hope what I said can help you .
Yours ,
Liu Ming
(回信的开头和结尾不必抄写在答题卡上)
命题形式：
今年的中考作文题目仍然以书信形式，即“假如你是XXX，你的美国朋友XXX给你写了一封信，请你根据来信内容，写一封回信…”
内容要点：
1. 回答她的问题
2. 提出建议
3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法
来信内容简要说明：
Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。
整体分析：
今年的作文题目较往年而言，总体来说变化较大。
从2007年-2010年的题目来看，回信的形式出现过两次，分别为2007年的大纲卷和2010年中考题，但是，与这两次不同之处在于，这两次的来信内容，非常明显地暗示考生所写回信的观点走向。如：2007年来信暗示考生所写回信内容基本为建议对方不要太痴迷于影星，而应该多在自己的学习上努力；2010年来信中明确表示听说北京的公交服务很好，题目中也说明“并介绍北京良好的公交服务”。众多考生所写作文内容差别不大，多为积极向上的观点。
而今年的考题，出现了前所未见的貌似说明文，但含有部分议论文的形式。即：回信中建议对方“借” 或“不借”由考生自己拟定，来信中没有明确暗示。由考生自己选择，只要能够言之有理，逻辑通顺，总体观点积极向上，就不会出错。
而说到内容，虽然2011年海淀区一模的作文题目“对于中学生如何支配自己的零用钱”中提到了 “money”，而东城一模作文题目“My Best Friend” 提到了 “friendship”，但是像今年中考作文题目中提到的“面对好友，Alice是否该借钱给她” 处理对于朋友的信任和金钱之间的关系，实属有些出乎大家的意料之外。既贴近学生的日常生活，避开了考前大家常常会练习到的“环保”、“抗灾”等大话题，又形式灵活，给考生的发挥空间越来越大。从而考生在进入考场之前准备的常见话题的经典句子，貌似无用武之地。体现了北京市中考题旨在考察学生的逻辑，即文章只要要点齐全，逻辑通顺，句式灵活多变，所表达观点明确，所得分数就不会低。
解题思路：
依旧牢记“结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点”五大要素，审题一定要仔细，看准题目中的要点为：回答她的问题；提出建议；对于此事谈谈你的看法。
1. 结构、要点
文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句”Do you meet things like this?” ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have met things like this. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为” I’m so sad。”， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 “ Don’t worry” 或者表示理解对方的感受 “I can understand you。”
文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：
l If it’s not a lot of money, you can lend it to her。(如果钱不多的话，可以借给她)
2 If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you’d better advise her to ask her parents for help. (如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助)
3 If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend。(如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。)
文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答”why”，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：
l Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. (友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。)
2 We students don’t have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it’s always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. (我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持诚实)
2. 逻辑
如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 --- 提出建议 --- 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。
3. 语法、亮点
根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。
范文：
I used to have the same problem, but I have solved it successfully.
As for your problem, I think it will be a good idea to lend her the money, as an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” If you think Angela is your friend, why not give her trust and try your best to help her? What’s more, if you are afraid that she won’t pay the money back, you can ask her patiently for it. Writing a letter will also be a good way for you.
In my opinion, friends should trust each other and respect each other. Friendship is just like the warm sunshine in winter, it plays an important rule in our lives. We should appreciate that sunshine.
All in all, helping your friends and you will never regret.
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Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my suggestions.
I think it’s a good idea for you to ask her how much money does she need and why does she need it at first. If she needs a large number of money, you shouldn’t lend her. You could tell her that students are not allowed to decide the way to use such a lot of money. And if her reasons of borrowing money are not necessary at all, you don’t need to lend her your money. You can advise her to spend money on something useful. Meanwhile, if you think her reason is quite proper and you do have some money, then weather to do it is up to you. However, it’s not bad for you to lend her the money if you had got her permission.
Although I don’t have the same problem as you, borrowing money from friends is always quite questionable. In my opinion, it’s not a good way of borrowing money, especially from friends or classmates. If students need money, they could tell their parents, if their reasons sound logical enough; their parents must be willing to lend them money. When someone runs out of money, the real friends will never lend you money help you buy fashion clothes which are just for showing of or something like this.
I hope my suggestions can help you deal with this problem.
Yours,
Liu Ming
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. I’ll give you a hand.
You said your friend Angela wanted to borrow money from you but you are afraid she won’t pay you back. If I were you, I would lend her the money if she really needs it. You should believe her because she is your close friend.
Although I think friendship depends on believing, I don’t think it is a good way to borrow money from friends. So you’d better tell her that she should try to make money by herself rather than borrow from others. And I also think teenagers should save money and they could use it when they need.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you. You don’t need to worry about this. I think I am here to help you out.
Just like you, I have experienced the same problem. If you really think that she is your close friend, you should lend her some money. A day or some days later, if she doesn’t return it, you could just ask her for the money. Trust me, it is not a big deal. And then, if she always borrows your money without giving it back, you will probably find out that she isn’t a very responsible person. It is not bad for you, isn’t it? However, you don’t even need to worry, perhaps she will return the only just tomorrow morning and say “Thank you!” come on, just be happy!
Yours,
Liu Ming
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t be nervous. I have had the same problem as you. and I think I could give you some suggestions.
First, I think you should ask her the reason of borrowing money. If she wants to do something just like playing computer games, you could refuse her politely. But if she really needs the money to do good things like books, you can consider lending her the money.
Second, if you are afraid she won’t pay you back, why not write it down? Write down how much money she has borrowed from you and when she promises to give it back, then sign your names. It would be the fairest way to keep both of you happy.
If I were you, I won’t be worry about it any more. After all, she is a close friend of yours! As we always say，“Friendship is more important than money” You will trust her, won’t you?
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours，
Liu Ming
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