2011年陕西高考英语作文及范文 发布时间:2019-06-08 21:27:16
2011年陕西高考英语作文
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。
范文:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. Personally speaking, it is not quite right for you to do so.
First and foremost, even though grades play an important part in children’s study, their personality, ability and perseverance etc. have always been making a big difference for a lifetime. Moreover, too much pressure on children makes them lose the interest in study and consequently they do not know what to do but pursue high grades. In addition, it is punishment that forms the big gap between parents and children.
From what have been discussed above, firstly, you are supposed to understand your daughter and make friends with her. Secondly, a pleasant reward can be given to her whenever she makes a progress not only in study but in other aspects like playing. All in all, it is hoped that you will get along with your child and wish her a bright future.
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