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高考英语满分作文技巧及范文 发布时间：2019-06-08 21:34:27
高考英语满分作文技巧及范文
一、图表作文框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), 作文题目的议题 has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. On the one hand, ______. On the other hand, ______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, _______ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
举例：
图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。图表作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文，内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析，系统准确地表达出图表含义，并得出令人信服的结论。
一、图表作文的命题形式
1．表格式
将统计的数据或被说明的对象直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。这类题型一般以说明文和议论文居多，往往是介绍、说明某种情况或辩论某种观点、看法，但有时也可能是记叙文。
2．图像式
可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图、以条形形式表示数据大小或数量之间差异的条形图，以圆内扇形面积的大小表示总体中部分结构变化的圆形图等。这类题型一般以说明文居多，是一些关于生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。
二、图表作文的应试策略
1．审读图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质，做到“四确定”。首先，确定文章的体裁；其次，确定文章的结构；再次，确定文章的时态；最后，确定文章的人称。
2．审读图表后的要求，寻找做题规律，要注意以下几个方面：
(1)词数：100左右。
(2)开头或结尾已给出，这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾；其次，要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格，力求前后一致。
(3)内容完整，即要点齐全，写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。
(4)行文连贯。行文必须做到形连和意连。形连要力求自我特色词汇的使用，以增加得分“亮点”。意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇，如however；besides；instead；in the meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact等，这样才能写出好文章。
(5)注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，确保语言表达的高级性。常见写作技巧主要包括：简单句与复合句的交替使用；主动语态为主，适度穿插被动语态；大胆使用平行结构；适当调整句中定语、状语的位置，使句子表达多样化；三大从句与三种非谓语动词灵活使用；特殊句式(如强调句、感叹句、疑问句、省略句)点缀其间等。
写作 典范
1 (2012 北京，
假设你是红星中学高三（1)班的学生李华，校报英文版正在 开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将 你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。
注意：
1.日记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Saturday, June 2
This morning,
Fine
[写作提示]
本文为记叙文,主要人称为第一人称，时态为一般过去时态。
内容要点:①发现两个游客找不到路;②主动上前询问游客需要 什么帮助;③告诉游客线路;④游客上车后互相道别。
3 •参考词汇:be lost/get lost 迷路;go up to…走向 ；the Temple of
Heaven 天坛;appreciate 感激;wave 挥手。
One possible version：
Saturday, June 2 Fine
This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map，looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20，which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly.
Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus，I felt a kind of satisfaction.
2 (2013 福建）
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、 孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用 英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
描述漫画内容；
分析漫画所揭示的问题；
提出你的看法。
书面表达
词数120左右；
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:铺路pave the way
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
2.内容要点：
描述漫画内容；
分析漫画所揭示的问题；
提出你的看法。
One possible version ：
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
3(2012 北京，）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
Last Monday,
[写作提示]
立意:相信自己,不要在意别人怎么说。
确定图中要素 根白铅笔和一根快要被用完了的黑铅笔。
分析要素之间的关系——白铅笔嘲笑黑铅笔。
如何理解这幅图一黑铅笔虽然快被用完,但物尽其用。
从中得到的观点——对于自己所做之事要有信心，无论周围人如何嘲笑自己。
参考1
参考2
One possible version ：
I think the white pencil，looking proud and delighted，is laughing at the black pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” The black pencil, on the other hand，remains calm. The white pencil’s words let him fall into deep thought. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he，s approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.
In reality，we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.
书面表达
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。
（请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）
高分 范文
满分作文
Last Monday， we were having our Chinese class （重点短语）when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. （要点：图片1）We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back（重点短语） ，with the help of some others（重点短语）， to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital（重点短语）（要点：图片2） . The following day，we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed （现在分词短语作宾语补足语）with a leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her （重点短语）and hoped that （宾语从句） she would recover soon. （要点：图片3）This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair （介词短语作状语）to give us lessons(不定式作状语) （要点：图片3）. We were all deeply moved and proud of（重点短语） having such a responsible teacher.
整体感受，使文章主题升华。
针对 训练
请根据图表所示，就某城市空气污染的状况写一篇英文报道，并提出一两条改进建议。
注意：1.词数100左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2．参考词汇：车辆vehicle。
With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious.___________________
【参考答案】
With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious.In this city，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.
Air pollution is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to others’health as well as to that of the smokers. Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
We should take some measures to fight against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas.We can plant more trees，grass and flowers. All in all，if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved.
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