2016高考英语书面表达集训

2016高考英语书面表达集训发布时间：2019-06-09 17:10:01

2016高考英语书面表达集训（十二）
【高阶特练】第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第二节   书面表达（满分25分） 按照题目要求或提示来完成下列表述。
【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。
一、复习建议
（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。
（二）注重平时的练笔。近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝 2008年奥运会申办、举办成功等。对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。
（三）明确写作方向。从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。例如：书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。
（四）注意平时的词汇积累。针对考生平时练习时出现的没词可用，写了不知是否正确等情况，建议考生们采用听、读、写相结合的办法，增加语言输入，扩大存储量。高三年级不可避免地要进行大量的听和读的练习，在做完听力和阅读理解后，可以停下来，用一点时间有意识地增加针对写作的语言输入，比如将听过或读过的表达方式回忆一下并记住，或者将有用的短语标出来，记在笔记本上，以备事后记忆之用。注意选取的资料应与考生自己的写作水平相近，还要提高记忆的准确性。
二、解题技巧
高考英语书面表达题解题应遵循五步骤的原则进行。2015年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲—英语中对写作这样要求：“要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能(1)准确使用语法和词汇。(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。
如何写好一篇作文分5个步骤
（一）仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。
（二）根据要点，遣词造句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。
（三）确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、what's more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。But, however, otherwise, though, despite, in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。
（四）句式丰富，避免重词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，本人认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)、适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，这些都是有效的途径。比如：When he arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)→On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail. Having arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(使用了介词+动名词和现在分词短语，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I won't believe what he says.(一般)→No matter what he says, I won't believe it.(让步状从句，高级)。
（五）认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是高考英语作文网上进行阅卷以来，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁和美观，为争取高分作文做好铺垫。
三、修正小误
1、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点
2、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多
3．句子结构错误 ①双谓语现象②句子结构混乱
4．动词使用错误 ①时态错误②语态错误③滥用be动词
5．汉语式英语
6. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
7. 名词单复数错误
8、词义模糊，用词不够准确
9、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.
10、逻辑错误，如：because与so或者although与but等同时出现在同一个句子里。
【考点精练】

Test 1
假如你叫李华，是一名中学生。家乡的古刹历史悠久，闻名遐迩，游客如织，你为此而自豪。但你最近很苦恼，因为有些人打起了古刹的主意，想把它拆掉建成工厂。为保护古刹，你给某英语报社写一封信，提出以下几点建议：
1. 限制游客数量以保护古刹；2. 建立网站，供人们网上欣赏；3. 另选其他地点建立工厂。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Editor,
I’m a student. I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village. _________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
                                                               Yours
                                                               Li Hua

Test 2
假定你是李华，暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东Tricia家中，回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tricia,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua

Test 3
假设你是李梅，你的好友Kathy给你发了一封邮件，请根据邮件内容给Kathy写一封回信。
    内容包括：
    1．介绍你勇敢面对挑战的经历；
    2．你的合理建议。
    注意：120词左右。短文的开头及结尾已给出。（不计入总词数）
Dear Li Mei,
    I have a problem, and I don’t know what to do. Our school is going to hold an English Drama Contest. I am interested in it and I have signed up for it. But now as the contest is drawing near, I feel more and more nervous and anxious and I even want to quit ... Have you ever had such experiences? When you face challenges, what do you usually do? I will be very grateful if you give me some advice.

Test 4
假如你是李华，你英国的朋友Tom给你来信说暑假就要来了，但他不知道应该在暑假期间做些什么有意义的事，希望你给予建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回信：
暑假建议：1.休息，补习差科；
          2.结交新朋友，发现新事物等；
          3.游览参观，看书等开阔眼界；
注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数）
Dear Tom,
From your letter I know that your summer vacation is coming.



                                                                   Yours,
                                                                   Li Hua
Test 5
假定你是李华。你的加拿大笔友 Peter 给你发了邮件，说他叔叔 Smith 将于 12 月 12 日上午 11:30 乘航班 CA988 到你所在的城市参加会议，同时带来了你想要的巧克力，请你按时接机。请你速回邮件说明：

乐意按时接机； 2．接机方式：在飞机场出口处举一牌子“Smith is welcome” ； 3．接到人后会立即回信。

注意： 1. 词数在 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing ?

Test 6
假定你是李华，对中国传统医药很感兴趣。你获悉中国药学家屠哟哟因发现了青篙素被授
予2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。请给你的美国朋友David发一封邮件分享此消息。信件须
包括以下内容：
      心情：骄傲和激动。
      评价：她找到了治疗疟疾的方法，数千万人从中受益。
      志向：立志考入屠哟坳的母校北大，造福人民。
    注意：1．词数100左右；
          2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
          3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
    参考词汇：
    1．药学家：pharmacologist
    2.青篙素：artemisinin
    3. 2015年诺贝尔生理学或医学奖：The 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
    4.疟疾：malaria
Dear David,

Test 7
假设你是商丘某高中学生李华，请为你的澳大利亚笔友Tim写封电子邮件，介绍商丘的情况及一些旅游景点，希望Tim到商丘来旅游。主要内容包括：
    1．商丘地处中原，交通便利，气候宜人。
    2．重点介绍两处旅游景点，如：南湖、商丘古城遗址、应天书院遗址等。
    注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
          2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：商丘古城--the ancient city of Shangqiu 应天书院--Ying tian Academy
南湖--the South Lake
Dear Tim,
Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. __________________________________________
______________________________________
Yours sincerely,
         Li Hua

Test 8
假如你是李华。你的好友John给你发来电子邮件说他最近刚去了美国一所中学学习，但对那里的生活很不习惯，为此他感到非常苦恼。请你给他回一封电子邮件，提几点建议。
内容要点：
1. 尊重当地风俗习惯，积极融入当地人生活；
2. 主动和美国学生交流，和他们交朋友；
3. 和朋友们一起参加户外运动；
4. 注意自己的言行举止，和朋友坦诚相处。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语意通顺；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John，

Test 9
假定你是李华。为了加强大家的消防安全童识，你校邀请消防员在学校大厅举行了安全知识讲座。请给美国朋友彼得写一封信，简述活动情况以及你的感受。要点如下：
1.活动时间：上周三下午3点；
2.讲座内容（典型火灾案例，如何火灾自救，提问互动等）；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
      2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
      3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school.

______________________________________________________

Test 10
假如你是李华，新当选的学校英语学习社团（English Club）团长。现在，请你写一篇介绍这个社团的广播稿，欢迎同学们参加。
    1．成立时间：2015年5月1日；
    2．社团目的：开阔学生视野，激发英语学习兴趣；
    3．具体内容：话题讨论（同学们感兴趣的或热点话题）；
                 常识积累（中西方文化等）；
                 比赛类（英语演讲、辩论等）
    注意：1．词数不少于100；
          2．请勿提及学校真实名称；
          3．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, attention, please]
Good news for you!
_________________________________________________

Test 11
假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：
1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；
2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；
3 房间要求：预定一个房间，房间不一定很大，但要有浴室；可以上网；
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________
Test 12
2016高考英语书面表达集训

距离高考剩下不到一年的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。
注意：
1．词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好，
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. ___________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Test 13
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
________________________________________________________________

Test 14
一年以后你将成为一名大学生，请以“我的大学生活”为主题写一篇短文。内容应包括对理想的大学的描述以及你在大学里的学习和课余活动等。
注意: 1. 次数100左右；
      2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
      3. 开头语已经为你写好，不计入总次数。
   One year later, I will be a freshman in an ideal university, __________________________________

Test 15
你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。请根据下面所给的要点写一篇英语短文
（1）你所梦想的工作；
（2）你的兴趣或特长；
（3）该工作的重要性；
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯
（3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
      As a Senior 3 student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future.                     .                                          ____________________________

【高阶特练】2016高考英语-书面表达集训（十二）答案
Test 1
Dear Editor,
    I’m a student, I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village. It’s a cultural relic with a long history, which makes it so famous that many tourists visit it every year.
    But now I feel worried about it. Though much money is brought in, part of it has been badly destroyed. Worse still, some people in my village want to pull it down and build a new factory where the old temple is. It represents the past of my village, so it should be protected well.
    The number of the visitors should be limited to protect the old temple. Also, a website should be built where people can look at the pictures of the temple without destroying its beauty. As for the factory, it should be built in some other places. Do you think so?
    I’m looking forward to your early reply.
                                                               Yours,
                                                                Li Hua

Test 2
Dear Tricia,
I’ve come back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural and adapt to the life there. So I’m so grateful to you.
By the way, attached to the letter are two photos taken with you, which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. You are expected to come to China soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
Test 3
Dear Kathy,
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.You are not the single person who has had such an experience. When I participated in a speech contest last year, I also felt very nervous and even thought of withdrawing from the contest. After a painful struggle, I decided to face up to the challenge. And finally I made it, overcoming my fear and anxiety, and showing my confidence on the stage. It was through this challenge that I realize the importance of being brave and optimistic.
Every challenge is our opportunity to grow, no matter how difficult it is. So my suggestion is that you should face this challenge bravely because we know that on the other side of a challenge, there is always hope. As long as you have tried your best, you are great, whatever the results are.
Yours,
Li Mei
Test 4
Dear Tom,
From your letter I know that your summer vacation is coming.As we know , summer vacation is probably the happist and the most important period in a student′s life.Here is some advice to you.
It is not a good time for you to have a good rest but also a good chance to improve your weak subjects.More importantly ,it gives you an opportunity to meet new people and do interesting things .Therefore,you should make full use of your time,instead of just watching TV at home .Being a volunteer, visting strange places and reading as many good books as possible will make your summer vacation a memorable experience.
I hope you will enjoy yourself in the coming summer vacation.
                                            Yours,
                                            Li Hua

Test 5
Dear Peter,
How are you doing ? I have known from your e-mail that your e-mail that your uncle Smith is coming to my city for a conference. Many thanks for the chocolates that you will ask him to bring me. Also, I’m willing to meet your uncle at the airport at 11:30 am, December 12. Please tell him that I’ll raise the welcome board, saying “Smith is welcome” and stand in front of the arrival gate to wait for him. I’ll wait until I meet him. And then I’ll take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to our city. Upon my meeting him, I’ll contact you as soon as possible. I’ll try my best to make your uncle happy here. I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to our city.
Yours,
Li Hua

Test 6
Dear David,
I would like to share a piece of exciting news with you.
Tu Youyou, a great pharmacologist of my country, was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin. Hearing the news, I felt proud as well as excited. She pioneered a new approach to malaria treatment. Her discovery has benefited hundreds of millions of people and promises to benefit many more.
I have been interested in Chinese traditional medicine. I will work hard to be admitted to Beijing University, from which Tu Youyou graduated. I will follow her example, devoted to benefiting as many people as possible.
                                                                     Yours,
                                                                     Li Hua

Test 7
Dear Tim,
Welcome to my hometown, Shangqiu. Shangqiu is located in Henan province and has the convenient transportation and pleasant climate.
Shangqiu is rich in tourist attractions such as the South Lake，the ancient city of Shangqiu.
The South Lake is well known for its beautiful scenery and clear water, the banks of which are lined with green trees. Another famous site is the ancient city of Shangqiu. Now it lies in the south of Shangqiu City. It is not only very beautiful but also has a long history. When you walk along the ancient wall, you can think of many stories happening in Shangqiu. I am sure you’ll have a good time in Shangqiu.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
                                                              Yours sincerely,
                                                                        Li Hua

Test 8
Dear John，
I’m really glad heart from you and know how you are getting along. I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some advice for you.
First of all, you should respect local customs and try to involve yourself in the lives of the locals. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” Secondly, don’t forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Last but not the least, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.
I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there.
Keep in touch.
                                                                 Yours                                                                   Li Hua

Test 9
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school.
In order to arouse our safety awareness, our school invited a fireman to give us a lecture on fire safety. It was held at our lecture hall at 3 p.m. last Wednesday.
First of all, some videos about fire accidents were shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman told us how to react in case a fire should occur. Finally, a Q&A session was arranged to answer the related questions and help us get a better understanding of fire safety.
Thanks to the lecture, I’ve learned how fast a fire can grow and what little time we may have to react. So destructive is a fire that each of us should be cautious in our daily life to prevent it from happening.

Test 10
Boys and girls, attention, please!
    Good news for you! An English club will be opened on May 1, 2015. It aims to broaden the students’ horizons and arouse your interest in English.
The Club is a platform where we can do many things. Firstly, we can discuss lots of things on our interest or the hot topic around us. What’s more, we can develop our understanding of the differences between the eastern and western cultures. In addition, kinds of English activities will be held regularly, such as English Speech Competition, English Debate Contest and so on.
I’m sure the club will be of great benefit to our English study. And every one of us is welcomed to join in it.
That’ s all. Thank you.

Test 11
Dear Alex,
    How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.
    To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room.
    I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Test 12
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to coordinate their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.
    As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities.
    Therefore, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study are equally important.

Test 13
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study。
I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop。
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.

Test 14
One year later, I will be a freshman in an ideal university, which is larger than my senior high school and I can ride a bicycle to attend classes.
In a sense, it is obvious that knowledge and technology are very important, so it is vitally important for me to learn from the educated professors. I must make full use of every minute to learn so that I can contribute to society in the future.
I will also meet many new friends coming from different cities, who can share their diverse life with me. I will own more free time to do what I want to without much limitation, such as playing football and enjoying music. In short, only in this way will my university life be different and colorful.

Test 15
As a Senior 3 student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future. Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.
First, I’m an energetic girl/boy with great patience. That’s what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion. Besides, I am crazy about the English language, and I am doing quite well. Above all, teachers are generally respected and well-paid. With two vacations each year, I may enjoy more relaxing time. As a responsible girl/boy, I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.
In short, I’ll work even harder to become a popular English teacher.

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