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中考英语作文冲刺高分四步法 发布时间:2019-08-04 19:53:24
中考英语作文冲刺高分四步法
 
中考英语书面表达试题(15分左右)属综合运用型试题,是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容,抓住要点和中心思想能力,是“压轴题”。专家认为,只要学生培养好写作兴趣,并进行点滴的积累,掌握一定的方法技巧,稳步提高能力,达到理想效果是非常快捷的。他结合自己多年的教学心得,以及近几年编写指导学生中考英语的经验,给出了四个步骤,初三学生不妨在寒假里按此法多多练习。
  多关注焦点、热点、人文关怀类题材
  李老师告诉记者,近几年的中考书面表达命题常见题型一是根据所给标题写作,即命题作文,如My school/family/class/hometown等;二是根据英语情景提示写作或者是根据表格提示写作,即话题作文;三是根据一幅图画或者带有一些图片说明的题目,即看图写作。
  这三种都属材料作文,特点是给出特定的书面材料,并准确地记述、描写、转达某一活动的内容或动机,从而达到书面语言交际的目的。体裁有记叙文、描写文、说明文和应用文(英文书信、E-mail、感谢信)、日记、请假条、便条、讲稿、启事、电话留言条、贺卡、发言稿(值日报告)、介绍、通知、看图写话等。
  李老师着重强调了一点,近年的中考英语作文基本上是材料作文。这些题材与生活实际紧密联系,并关注社会焦点、热点问题,体现人文关怀。所设计的情景密切联系现实生活,写作题材源于生活,使学生有话可说,有利于写出真情实感,也有利主动性、创造性地发挥。所以,学生在复习时要多关注社会焦点、热点问题、人文关怀类题材。
  打牢基础,养成勤练习的好习惯
  李老师表示,要想在有限的篇幅和时间内,使书面表达行文流畅,语言丰富、得体,就要按题目的需要和自己实际英文水平,扬长避短,选用最熟悉的最有把握的词、句,注意时态、语态等多种句式的交替使用。
  “最主要的是一定要平时打牢基础,练好基本功,养成练习的好习惯;多研究中考书面表达的要求,重视技巧训练;适时进行备考训练。”李老师提醒学生要掌握中考书面表达对学生的能力要求。
  这些能力包括:在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上写出句意完整、语法准确的句子;能根据所提供的材料、信息、图片、图表及英文词汇完成应用文、话题作文和看图作文;切中题意,文理通顺;上下文连贯,逻辑正确;要素完整,语言得当;格式正确;无拼写错误及大小写错误,书写规范整洁,标点正确。
  四步骤法轻松“拿下”书面表达
  李老师结合自己多年的教学心得,以及近几年编写指导学生中考英语的经验,就中考英语书面表达如何能够在考场有限时间内得高分,给出了四个步骤,初三学生不妨一试,并在寒假里按此法多多练习。
  认真审题包括文字说明、图表、短文提供的资料和信息,以及参考词汇、字数要求等,准确把握人物关系和故事情节,理解主题大意,审清文体,确定格式,确定人称、主体时态。
  列出要点结合提示信息,把涉及的所有写作要点逐条列出,编写要点提纲,组织语言。如:
  1.开篇句:I think that...我认为......;It is often said that......人们经常这么说......
  2.连接句:Among all the given reasons, one should be mentioned.在所有理由中,有一个值得一提;The main reason why......is that......之所以......的主要原因是......
  3.结束句:一般情况下,记叙文和说明文采用自然结尾法;夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语,首尾呼应。结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。如:Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that……考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以做出这样的结论……另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year等。
  完成写作
  写作时语言要纯正地道,避免母语的影响;用多种表达方式,避免重复和呆板;使用熟悉的短语、句式,提高准确率。如:
  1.并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, not only... but also, neither...nor...... both...and……
  2.转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however……
  3.时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last……
  4.空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right……
  5.比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as……
  6.对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of……
  7.递进关系的过渡词:also, and, then, too, in addition……
  8.因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, so, therebefore……
  9.解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually......
  10.强调的过渡词:in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important……
  11.目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose……
  12.列举的过渡词:for example, such as……
  13.总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally……
  仔细检查
  查格式是否有误;人称、时态是否恰当;语法结构是否正确;注意英汉表达的差异;字母大小写;字数是否合乎要求等。
中考英语写作避免陷进四大误区
通过对近些年英语作文出题的趋势来看,中考对英语写作的考察更偏重于交际情景设置和不同体裁的要求,但是由于客观和种种主观原因,很多同学的作文容易走入种种误区,专家举出四种写作误区做分析:
  一、构思、准备不充分,匆忙下笔
  任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的,所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多孩子目前存在一个情况,想到哪写到哪,有记流水帐的习惯;这也造成了作文杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。学大教育老师表示,针对这种情况可以从以下几个方面予以解决:
  1、认真审题,审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。
  2、确定文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的。
  3、列提纲,打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
  二、中心重点不突出,切题不准确
  英语写作不是语文散文(形散神不散),写英语作文,尤其是在中考大压力下短时内写出高分作文一定要注意这一点。造成这种情况的主要原因是动笔前并没有认真审题和思考,对出题者希望得到的预期尚未揣摩透彻,这也就造成了一些同学虽然语言功底非常不错,但是最终的结果还是没有拿到一个自己预期的心理分数,最大的问题就出在切题不准确或者不够突出中心上了。
  三、忽视文化差异
  我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
  四、忽视细节,无谓失分
  很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉"下笔如有神",但最终结果出来后大惑不解。据学大教育老师解释,这方面的问题主要体现在忽视标点、书写、段落安排、大小写的问题,所以只要更加注重细节,这些无谓失分就可以解决。
写好英语作文的10个简单原则
你是否真的写得一手好作文呢?你有没有停下来想一想自己的写作质量?你确定你的写作技巧比较好?你写的内容别人能正确理解吗?还是说你的读者对你到底想表达什么内容感到迷惑?
  Have you ever stopped and thought about the quality of your writing? Are you sure it's considered to be good writing? Are you getting the right message across, or are your readers confused as to what you're trying to accomplish?
  1. Express, not impress.
  是表达,而不是印象
  Good writing is not about the number of words you've produced, the quality of the adjectives you've written or the size of your font–it's about the number of lives you've touched! It's whether or not your reader understands you. It's about expression, not impression.
  写得好不好不在于你用了多少词、你用的形容词的质量或你使用的字体大小——而在于你写的东西感动了多少人!写得好不好是看你的读者是否理解你。它是关于表达,而不是印象。
  2. Simple sentences work best.
  简单的句子效果最好。
  示例:
  - The only possible option in order to accelerate the growth of the food industry is to focus on the fact that the target market of this business demands convenience, competence and cost-effectiveness.
  -要想加快食品行业的发展,最可能的方式是聚焦于目标市场对便利性、管辖权和成本效益的要求上。
  - Better: The food industry can grow faster if food trucks focus on convenience, competence and cost-effectiveness.
  -更好的写法:如果食品交易聚焦于便利性、管辖权和成本效益,那么食品行业会发展得更快。
  3. Active, rather than passive.
  主动,而不是被动
  示例:
  - The offering price was established by the real estate vendor and the negotiation process was initiated by the real estate buyer.
  -定价是由房地产商决定的,协商过程是由购房者发起的。
  - Better: The real estate vendor set the offering price, and the real estate buyer started negotiating.
  更好的写法:房地产商定价,购房者展开协商。
  4. Know who your target audience is.
  了解目标受众
  Who are you writing for? Who do you expect to read your article, your book, or your blog post? Will they care about what you're talking about? Will they understand the message that you're trying to get across? Good writing isn't generic; it's specific because it's targeted towards a group of people with something common binding them.
  你为谁写作?你期望谁来读你的文章、你的书或你的博客?他们关心你写的内容吗?他们会理解你想表达的信息吗?好的写作不是泛泛的;而是具体的,因为它针对的是一群有共同特征的人。
  5. Read it aloud.
  大声朗读
  Reading your works out loud allows you to notice something that you might not have noticed if you were just reading it silently. Go on, read them out loud now. Also, try to listen to your work objectively as you read it. Are you making sense? Or are you simply stringing a couple of words together just to fill a gap?
  把你的作品朗读出来,这会让你注意到默读时所忽略的内容。现在就把它们朗读出来吧。另外,当你朗读时,试着客观地去倾听你的作品。你写的有理吗?还是只是把几个词凑在一起来填补空白?
  6. Avoid using jargon as much as possible.
  尽量避免使用行话。
  Not everyone in your audience will know what a "bull market” is. Not everyone knows that "pyrexia” is basically the same thing as "a fever”。 And surely you can come up with a better term for high blood pressure than "hypertension”?
  不是每个读者都知道“牛市”是什么。不是每个人都知道“pyrexia” (注:发热的临床用语)和“fever”基本上是一个意思。当然,你可以造一个比“hypertension”更好的词来表示高血压。
  7. In terms of words, size matters.
  词的长短也很重要。
  Please, don't strain yourself by browsing the Internet, looking for complicated and fancy-sounding words. Less is always more.
  请不要让自己忙于浏览互联网来寻找复杂及花哨的词。少即是多。
  示例:
  - The man gave me a look so sharp that I sincerely believed it could pierce my heart and see my innermost fears.
  -那名男子看我的眼神如此的犀利,我真的相信它能刺穿我的心,看清我内心的恐惧。
  - Better: The man glared at me.
  更好的写法:那名男子瞪着我。
  8. Being positive is better than being negative–even in writing!
  肯定比否定要更好——即使在写作中!
  示例:
  - I did not think that the unbelievable would not occur.
  -我不认为令人难以置信的事情不会发生。
  - Better: I thought the unbelievable would happen.
  -更好的写法:我认为令人难以置信的事情是会发生的。
  9. Set aside time for revising and rewriting–after you've written the whole content.
  留下时间来修改和重写——在你写完全部内容后。
  I'm not suggesting that you should edit each time you've finished a paragraph–that would just be tedious. What I'm telling is that you should first give yourself some time to finish the content prior to editing. Write away. Don't edit yet. Don't focus on the grammar yet. Don't worry about the syntax, the synonym, the antonym or the order that you're using.
  我不是建议你每次写完一段话就修改一下——那样会很乏味。我建议你在编辑之前,应该给自己一些时间来完成写作的内容。写下来。先不要编辑。不要注重语法。不要担心语法、同义词、反义词或你用词的顺序。
  Write for yourself, but mostly, write for your target audience. Write the message clearly and don't be afraid to express your thoughts. Don't censor yourself yet. Let the words flow. Don't erase what you've written yet.
  为你自己写作,但最重要的是,为你的目标受众写作。把内容清晰地写下来,不要害怕表达自己的思想。不要审查自己。让你的文字流动。先不要删除你所写的内容。
  All the editing and the fixing will come later.
  编辑内容和调整内容可以稍后进行。
  10. Write. All the time.
  写下来。每时每刻。
  Good writing is simply always writing. Write when you're sad. Write when you're scared. Write when you don't feel like writing.
  好的写作技巧就是一直在写。悲伤时去写,害怕时去写,不想写的时候还要写。
 
 
中考英语作文满分必备万能句
 1.不用说…… It goes without saying that … = (It is) needless to say (that) …
  = It is obvious that …
  例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。
  It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
  2.在各种……之中,…… Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …
  例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
  Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
  3.就我的看法……;我认为……
  In my opinion, …
  = To my mind, …
  = As far as I am concerned, …
  = I am of the opinion that …
  例:In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
  就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
  4.随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …
  随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …
  例:With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.
  随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
  5. ……是必要的It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that …
  ……是重要的It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …
  ……是适当的It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …
  ……是紧急的It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …
  例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.
  It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.
  我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
  6.花费spend … on sth. / doing sth. …
  例:我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
  We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.
  7. how引导的感叹句
  例:那至少可以证明你很诚实。
  At least it will prove how honest you are.
  8.状语从句
  A)如果你不……,你就会…… If you don't …, you'll …
  例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.
  如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。
  B)如此……,以至于…… so … that …
  例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.
  当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。
  9.宾语从句
  我认为,…… / 我认为……不I think / I don't think that …
  我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …
  例:He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.
  他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
  10. Since + S + 过去式, S +现在完成式。
  例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
  自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。
 


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